Bastille Or Bust

As I said in the Introduction, this one never really went anywhere because the company was winding down and there wasn’t enough energy or impetus left for us to keep putting these things on. But at least Katherine and I had one happy night putting together a list of potential names for our characters, in an attempt to get into the zone. 

Aristocrats

The Abbé Nationale

The Bourbons (and their historical enemies, The Garibaldis)

Cardinal Sin

Count le Coste

Duc à l’Orange

Duchesse Potatoes

Palace guards: Guard de l’Est, Guard du Nord, Guard de Lyon, Guard di Lou

Le Chavalier Maurice

Madame de Pamplemousse

Milord Lucan, missing British aristo 

The Igne Family

Acetyl Igne, a doxy (“This is my doxy, Acetyl Igne”)

Auberge Igne

Chlor Igne, a harpie

Gelat Igne

Maggaz Igne

Mezzan Igne

Nicot Igne

Ovalt Igne

Winifred, Comtesse de Ligne (Win de Ligne)

            and her musical cousin Mandy Ligne

            and her greasy cousin Vassy Ligne

            and her sophisticated Israeli cousin Begin le Beg’Igne 

Characters

Albert Trosse, a dead weight

Amphetamine (big)

Ananas

Arti père

            and his son Arti fils

Bergerac, always wears a jersey

Bombazine

Canaille ’Ave Summore

Champignon, a fun guy to be with

Chanelle Tunnelle

Chateau de Windeaux

Citizen Smith

Claire de Lune

Claude Carpet, a cat owner

Clicquot, a widow

Crystalle Chandelier

Coche Nile

Coco Vin

Condom, a protector

Coup de Grasse and Meau de Grasse, a pair of gay young blades

De Chevaux, a horse trainer

De Cheveux, a bald person

Gillette Bloutou, in charge of the guillotine

Hugh Janus, a deformed beggar

Jacques, a frère

Jacques le Knife, a villain

Jacques de All Trades

Jacques et Gilles, mountain dwellers

Jacques Honoré, a storyteller

Jacques Ittin, a lazybones

Jean Connerie, a film star

Justine Tam, always late

Madame de Maintenance, a DIY expert

Madame Jetadore

The Man in the Iron Lung

The Man in the Woolly Balaclava

Margarine

Marie Banileau, a big-nosed singer

Marmite, my mate

Maurice Majeur

  and Maurice Mineur, his younger brother

Mayonnaise

Melamine

Mère de Mal

Mère Malade, very sweet

Monsieur le Pont d’Avignon

Napoleon Blownaparte (that’s him all over)

Paco Rabane, a smelly Spaniard

Patricia, Duchesse de Foie Gras (Patti de Foie Gras)

Paul Tax, v unpopular

Père d’Alors

and his wife Mère d’Alors

and their son Zut d’Alors

Pierre d’Aterre, a landlord

Polly Thene

Pomme de Terre

René Neause, has a cold

Riboflavine, vegetarian

Sir Percy Pimpernel, the Scarlet Blakeney

Stella Artois, reassuringly expensive

Sue Lespontsdeparis, a beggarwoman

Sydney Cardboard Box (caught carriage crawling)

Thiamine, vegetarian

The Three Buccaneers: Porthole, Arsehole and Boghole

and their cousins: Camisole, Blackhole and Eaune Geaule 

The Eau Family

Billy Eau, a straining cousin

Bim B’Eau, a dumb blonde

Bing Eau, a gambler

Blot Eau, a sot

Bucking Bronc’Eau, a cowboy

Cal Eau, an adolescent

Cally C’Eau, a dressmaker

Clue d’Eau, a detective

Cologne d’Eau, cousin from Germany

Columbeau, a detective

Cong Eau, cousin from Africa

Crim B’Eau, a cheerful white-bearded cousin

Dan Bileau, Cockney cousin

Dider Eau, a philosopher

Eau de Nile, a bit green around the gills

Fly M’eau, a jack the lad

Gigo l’Eau, a womanising cousin

Harry Eau, a detective

Harry Q’Eau, a vegetarian cousin

Hé h’Eau, a languid cousin

Hugh Guen’Eau, a displaced historical cousin

Incogneet Eau, a mysterious cousin

Ivan Eau, a Scottish cousin

Jean d’Eau, unknown cousin

Land Eau, a sailing cousin

Lewd Eau, a peeping Tom

Limpo P’Eau, friend of Cong Eau

Marie Eau, a mustachioed plumber

Pedal Eau, a Spanish cousin

Pong Eau, a cousin from Dalmatia

Quasimo d’Eau, a hunchbacked cousin

Ram B’Eau, a bodybuilder

Rouss Eau, a philosopher

Syke Eau, a mad cousin

Watt Eau, a silly arse English cousin

Westward Eau!, a cousin from Devon

Wun Hung l’Eau, a Chinese cousin

Yo Ho h’Eau, a Japanese cousin

Yves Eau, a sailor 

Places

The Alley Oop

The Alley Palais

Avenue Eniomestogotou (any homes to go to)

Avenue Addinuff

Belle Vuezue

Boulevard St Germain de Fer

Boulevard St Michelle Ma Belle

Château Box

Château Mouche

Château Meat

Château Puppet

Château de Windeaus

Paris Paris, it’s a wonderful ville

Rue de Remarque 

Audience Participation

Oh oui it is!

Oh non it isnt’!

Look derrière vous! / Elle est behind vous!

Take the Monet!

Ouvrez la boîte!

 

Let them eat Pot Noodle

Piaf with you! (go away)

ACT ONE 

(USC a small public convenience somewhere in France. It is simply a board facing the AUDIENCE with ‘Toilette Publique’ written on it. It is raised up so that anyone using it is visible from the chest up and from the knees down. 

Enter YOUNG PEASANT USR. He wears a hooped jersey, a beret and carries a strong of onions over his shoulder. He hangs the onions over the board and goes into the loo, staring out front, expressionless. He starts whistling ‘La Marseillaise’, contemplatively, but can’t get beyond the first two lines. He whistles it again, gets stuck at the same point, and shrugs. 

Enter OLD PEASANT USL with a furled flag which he parks against the board. He enters loo, and YOUNG PEASANT politely shifts over to give him room. After a bit, YOUNG PEASANT whistles the same few bars, absent-mindedly. OLD PEASANT just as absent-mindedly whistles the next two. They look at each other and have a simultaneous flash of inspiration. Together they whistle the next few bars… but it fizzles out. They try again but again get stumped. 

Enter YOUNG CRONE USR, confidently whistling the next phrase. She sets to work briskly flicking a duster over the urinal, briefly disconcerting YOUNG PEASANT and YOUNG PEASANT, then breezily joins them inside, adopting the same peeing pose as them. All three look at each other with a wild surmise, then gradually accept the situation and join together whistling ‘La Marseillaise’. 

Enter OLD CRONE USL, sweeping with a broom. She stares expressionless at the three heads lustily whistling away. In full flow, they all three wave her over to join them. Warily at first, she crosses into the urinal, then gets caught up in the general triumphant mood. They all four reach the final chorus and stand there belting it out at full volume. Finally they reprise the chorus, simultaneously marching out of the urinal, all adjusting their dress.  They form a heroic tableau centre stage, each waving their props (OLD PEASANT’s flag turns out to be a revolutionary emblem). They end the song with a triumphant triple stamp of their feet in unison, then beam broadly at each other before suddenly going shy again and shuffling about, humming the tune softly to themselves. 

Enter DSL JACQUES HONORE) 

JAC:     Ah, the Marseillaise! Battle song of the Republic and paean of victory for the Glorious Revolution. (to the OTHERS) You can stop peein’ now. (They fall silent) Breathes there a man with soul so dead who even now can listen to those stirring strains without getting a lump? I know I can’t, not even when it’s performed by such a revoting mob as this.

MOB:   ’Ere, who are you calling a mob?

JAC:     You’re meant to be representing the common people aren’t you?

MOB    Common people? We’ll have you know, mate, we are a frieze commemorating the glorious triumph of freedom over oppression.

JAC:     If you’re a frieze, then freeze. It’s my turn now.

MOB:   And who are you when you’re chez vous?

JAC:     I am your narrator for the evening. Jacques Honoré, à votre service.

MOB:   Jackanory? Tell us another one!

JAC:     Shut up. Yes, the French Revolution, that child prodigy of European Romanticism, whose convulsive parturition in turn brought forth –

MOB:   Convulsive what?

JAC:     Parturition. It means –

MOB:   (scoffing) We know what it means. (Muttering amongst themselves) What does parturition mean?

JAC:     Childbirth.

MOB:   We knew that. Eurgh!

JAC:     - which brought forth those three great A’s – liberté, egalité, fraternité.

MOB:   What about the three C’s then?

JAC:     Three C’s?

MOB:   Canapé, consommé and crudité

JAC:     If I might continue?

MOB:   Soyez le bienvenu.

JAC:     To begin at the beginning, France in the eighteenth century was a country in turmoil. The middle classes had grown up under the yoke of an ancient feudal/aristocratic oligarchy whose ossified systems were too rigidified to accommodate it, while the disenfranchised peasantry were suffocating beneath the weight of increasingly savage taxes imposed by a distant and uncaring nobility.

MOB:   Er, couldn’t you begin halfway through? We’ll be here all night.

JAC:     Louis XVI had inherited a practically bankrupt throne and, safe in his luxurious fortress at Versailles, was steadfastly refusing his ministers’ advice to bring in reforms. Everywhere peasants were starving. (To MOB, who haven’t been paying attention) That’s your cue.

MOB:   Oh. We’re starving!

JAC:     Many were up in arms.

MOB:   We’re up in arms!

JAC:     Those who weren’t revolting already were at least pretty disgusting. (The MOB pick their noses, scratch their bums, sniff their armpits etc) In short, the whole country was a powder keg waiting to explode, but just what was the spark which would set off the whole shooting match? Was it the Treaty of Paris which signed away lucrative French empires in India and North America to the British?

MOB:   Yeah, lousy Brits!

JAC:     No it wasn’t.

MOB:   Oh, pardon us.

JAC:     Was it the King’s attempt to close down the newly convened National Assembly, meeting to hammer out a more equitable constitution?

MOB:   Yeah, lousy King!

JAC:     No. So was it then the sudden plague of lice that attacked every rural hovel and left half the countryside bald and itching?

MOB:   Yeah, lousy – er – lice!

JAC:     Not that either. It was – garlic!

MOB:   Garlic?

JAC:     Yes, at last it can be revealed, it was garlic that brought the whole nation from its knees to its feet in a single concerted upsurge of nationalism.

            (Pause)

MOB:   Garlic?

JAC:     Our story starts on the quayside of Weston Super Merde, a small coastal resort in the Mediterranean province of Quiche Lorraine. On this quiet July morning the local peasantry dozes blissfully in the sun, ignorant of the momentous events they are about to put in train. Right, everyone look ignorant.

(The MOB manage this quite easily)

And that was all we wrote…


 
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